大家?guī)臀铱聪逻@封發(fā)信，第一次寫，有沒有語法或者用法的錯誤啊？

Dear ----

Most companies today use paper packaging to package their products. As a paper packaging manufacturer we specialize in the design, production, and printing of various low to middle-grade corrugated boxes, cartons, color boxes, paper angle protectors, honeycomb cartons, paper pallets, paperboards, and mesh bags, among others.

If you are interested in any of our products, do not hesitate to contact me. We would be happy to send you free samples for your evaluation.

Thank you for considering our company.

Best regards。

Abner

********** Co., LTD

Tel: 86-*******

Fax: 86-*******

[email]*******[/email]

除了首句話的“most of companies”應該改為 “most companies”，其他沒有明顯的語法或用法錯誤。建議在發(fā)信之前仔細檢查一遍以避免疏漏。

Dear Sir

He a nice day!

Do you need a reliable supplier for your products package? As a professional manufacturer of paper package, we are able to provide best products at competitive price. Here enclose some pictures of our paper package for your reference. If needed, free samples can be sent to you. We are sincerely to cooperate with you. Any other questions, pls contact me freely.

Best Regards

XXX

大概意思就是這樣吧， 你自己看看，有產(chǎn)品圖片的話可以付上一些圖片。。 其實有一些語法錯誤也是沒關系的 他們老外自己還經(jīng)常一堆錯誤呢 又不是每個老外英語都很好的

非常感謝，能有貼吧人的肯定，我這信心倍增?。?/p>

感謝批評，我改改在發(fā)上來

感謝各位大神給點寶貴意見，有沒有語法、用詞、語氣、句型什么的錯誤啊？這是我第一次自己寫，還找了別的參照，真心不會啊，希望跟各位大神好好學習。

要不你要寫什么內(nèi)容直接用中文讓7樓幫你翻譯吧！

看到想自殺。我的英語夠差了還能看出來你的問題。

As a professional manufacturer with paper packaging .好像whit在這里用的是不對的。

調(diào)轉(zhuǎn)一下變成As a professional paper packaging manufacturer應該會還好點，或是直接 As a professional paper packaging .

we good at ，別那么節(jié)省，be good at固定搭配。

do not hesitate to contact me 不要猶豫與我嗎？ please contact me immediately ，這個可能更通順簡單。

FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation 這句似乎也不行。樣品發(fā)送給你的評價？

雖然是剛?cè)胄?，但是由于之前是學物流專業(yè)的，專業(yè)英語還是有學的?？戳四氵@個文章，突然發(fā)現(xiàn)自己放下太久，看著單詞都是熟悉的，居然想不起來，這真的是提醒我要好好復習一下了?？上辉谏磉叞?！

我英語也不還很好，但是你有些順序還是顛倒了。

建議，寫信給客戶簡單明了吧！

我的英語很差，四級還沒過呢，這個月再考一次，￣□￣｜｜

能跟我說哪個地方顛倒了嗎？還有，7樓我改過的這個還有沒有毛??？

非常感謝

你這個。。。很次

Paper packaging is used by most of companies to package their products today.廢話

We are manufacturer specialize in Paper packaging. 語法不通，一個句子兩個結構

Designingproduction,printing will be done well with all kinds of low middle-grade corrugated boxes, cartons, color boxes, paper angle protector, honeycomb carton, paper pallets, paper board and mesh bag etc. 看的戳眼睛 ，建議直接砍掉。

If anything is interested to you, do not hesitate to contact me. FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation!

東西對

Dear----

As a professional manufacturer with paper packaging, we good at designing,production,printing.

If any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation!

Thanks & best regards。

Abner

現(xiàn)在呢？是不沒有重點??？客人會注意并切打看嗎？